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Ana G's avatar

The bar scene, the arm wrestling, and the mention of baseball reminded me of "the old man and the sea" when the old man was recalling his youth. But this story took a different turn. Amazing work.

Ricardo A. Martagón's avatar

Really? It’s been a minute since I last read The Old Man and the Sea, but I believe you 🙂 Thank you so much for reading and commenting 😇 You’ve made my day 🫶🏼

Rob Rodriguez's avatar

puta madre...don't mess around in bars is the lesson here I suppose. Nice writing Ricardo!

Ricardo A. Martagón's avatar

Jaja, thank you so much for reading, bro 🫂