Tonight, though, he just smiled at the quiet ocean and let the memory be.
that last line really is something! this was heartbreaking to read, honestly. i love how it's simple but gets you feeling
Catch feels? =)
definitely! had to sit there and stare into my screen for a bit to process it :(
Haha. Read Below the Window, the one before After Dinner, it’ll do something to you too =)
sure thing! im hoping you don't absolute destroy me rn though
Honestly, I hope I do 🫢
noo my poor heart can't :(
Really nice piece of flash fiction!
Thank you so much, E. You’re too kind 🥹 If you can, please check out the one I put out before. It’s called Below the Window, I think you might dig it.
“He just smiled at the quiet ocean and let the memory be.” Ten years of grief held in a single gesture, no drama, no collapse. Just a man and the habit of calling out to someone who isn’t there anymore. Awesome
Thank you, Marcelo. I’m so happy it moved you 🥹
this one is tragic, but very bittersweet. i love loves that last a lifetime ❤️
'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, that's life 🎶
that last line really is something! this was heartbreaking to read, honestly. i love how it's simple but gets you feeling
Catch feels? =)
definitely! had to sit there and stare into my screen for a bit to process it :(
Haha. Read Below the Window, the one before After Dinner, it’ll do something to you too =)
sure thing! im hoping you don't absolute destroy me rn though
Honestly, I hope I do 🫢
noo my poor heart can't :(
Really nice piece of flash fiction!
Thank you so much, E. You’re too kind 🥹 If you can, please check out the one I put out before. It’s called Below the Window, I think you might dig it.
“He just smiled at the quiet ocean and let the memory be.” Ten years of grief held in a single gesture, no drama, no collapse. Just a man and the habit of calling out to someone who isn’t there anymore. Awesome
Thank you, Marcelo. I’m so happy it moved you 🥹
this one is tragic, but very bittersweet. i love loves that last a lifetime ❤️
'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, that's life 🎶