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Rob Rodriguez's avatar

Damn that was twisted. I guess he succeeded at not getting kicked out after all.

Good job on the tension of the story and I was hooked from the very first sentence, wanting to know more about how that unfolded.

Ricardo A. Martagón's avatar

Thank you, mi hermano 🫶🏼

The Radical Individualist's avatar

You pulled me right into the story.

I guess the moral is, What goes around comes around.

Ricardo A. Martagón's avatar

Yo, thanks for reading 👹🫶🏼

Aaron Martinez's avatar

Poor Mrs. Nieves! That they make a distinction between killing a woman vs. just scaring her to death, but still opt to bury her in the backyard is hilarious.

Ricardo A. Martagón's avatar

😜 I’m glad you enjoyed, man. Thank you! 🙏🏼

Cedar Jones's avatar

This gave me a good chuckle. I loved the tension, and it was quite fucked up! Great stuff my friend.

Ricardo A. Martagón's avatar

I’m so happy it made you laugh, man 😆 Thank you 🙏🏼

Eugenia P. Frankenberg 🥀's avatar

i wasn’t sure how you were going to follow through on the premise of the first sentence! very interesting 🖤

Ricardo A. Martagón's avatar

I wasn’t either, haha. I just took a shot. 🫶🏽